Persuading letter! :D

This morning, during our class meet, we were talking about persuasive writing! Our task for that was to write a persuading letter and then post it on our blogs. I wrote about how you should go up north. Here is my persuasive writing.

kitten picture prompt :)

 Here's another picture prompt! Comment anything you think I should add to it!

Small high-pitched squeals echoed in an empty, and large home. but the squeals weren't coming from children, they were coming from kittens!

Those kittens actually looked like twin kittens. They had grey fur almost all covered with black stripes.

The two kittens looked as if they were play-fighting, which they were. One kitten was upside-down looking like it’s trying to balance on its head and back. While the other kitten was standing up with one paw reaching out to the other kitten.

In the background there was a dog, which to me, looked like a golden retriever. It layed on the wooden floor right behind the two kittens. Relaxed and unaware of what was going on.