Hi Aaliyah I like your scratch project it's funny and when my volume was low I played your video and it was so loud,next time can you make it more quieter,because that was loud.the funny thing about it was when the cat was chasing the food van.Next time can you add people in the background and maybe some animals.I really like your blog and hope I see q new blog comment from you.
Ka pai Aaliyah. How awesome that you've already got two pieces of feedback! I was surprised by the loud noise! My tip would be to make sure you include the message about what makes a quality blog comment.
Hi Aaliyah, It's Taliyah from Belfast School I liked the way you made this on scratch.This reminded me of when my class had a go on scratch last year. Maybe next time you could tell us why you had to do this or if you just decided you wanted to do this because you were bored. Was this a whole class activity? -Taliyah
hi Aaliyah, I loved your scratch project. i think you should add some other animals in the background and then they all go chasing after the food van and maybe like a nother animal that has some nuts or something and then it drops its food and then it runs after the food van
Hello Aaliyah it is Marist I found this very funny cause I see people doing this all the time it also reminds me of the time I chased after and ice-cream truck.But I do think you could add little more to it though.
Hey Aaliyah! What a wonderful scratch project. I like the cat and the waffle van. Maybe add more animals and also try to add a different back round that is clip art. It's because the van is driving on the grass!!!! :-D :-)
Hello Aaliyah it is Ahmed i liked your scratch project it was nice. It reminded me when i went to the ice cream man and i forgot the money for the ice cream then the ice cram man left I was looking for the money for a long time.
It’s quite funny seeing a cat chase a ice cream truck. It makes me wonder what kind of ice cream flavours they might have.. a fishy one maybe? Or what about jelly meat?
I don’t know a lot about scratch but could you make it a bit longer? And maybe a bit slower as well? And how about some other animals chasing the truck?
Thanks for the suggestions, Marleen! I'll add some of them! I was just waiting for a few other comments about what I could add to make it like and actual story.
hi Aaliyah I liked how you put a waffle on the van. But I think you should change the voice of the character so the people can understand it better.
ReplyDeleteHello! I didn't put the waffle on the van, it actually came like that. and Thank you for the feedback! I'll add it!
DeleteHi Aaliyah I like your scratch project it's funny and when my volume was low I played your video and it was so loud,next time can you make it more quieter,because that was loud.the funny thing about it was when the cat was chasing the food van.Next time can you add people in the background and maybe some animals.I really like your blog and hope I see q new blog comment from you.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback! I will make it a bit more quiet and i'll add some more characters.
Deletethanks for the comment :)
Ka pai Aaliyah. How awesome that you've already got two pieces of feedback! I was surprised by the loud noise! My tip would be to make sure you include the message about what makes a quality blog comment.
ReplyDeleteHi Aaliyah, It's Taliyah from Belfast School
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you made this on scratch.This reminded me of when my class had a go on scratch last year. Maybe next time you could tell us why you had to do this or if you just decided you wanted to do this because you were bored. Was this a whole class activity?
-Taliyah
hi Aaliyah,
ReplyDeleteI loved your scratch project. i think you should add some other animals in the background and then they all go chasing after the food van and maybe like a nother animal that has some nuts or something and then it drops its food and then it runs after the food van
Hello Aaliyah it is Marist
ReplyDeleteI found this very funny cause I see people doing this all the time it also reminds me of the time I chased after and ice-cream truck.But I do think you could add little more to it though.
Hey Aaliyah! What a wonderful scratch project. I like the cat and the waffle van. Maybe add more animals and also try to add a different back round that is clip art. It's because the van is driving on the grass!!!! :-D :-)
ReplyDeleteHello Aaliyah it is Ahmed i liked your scratch project it was nice. It reminded me
ReplyDeletewhen i went to the ice cream man and i forgot the money for the ice cream then the ice cram man left I was looking for the money for a long time.
Hey Aaliyah
ReplyDeleteIt’s quite funny seeing a cat chase a ice cream truck. It makes me wonder what kind of ice cream flavours they might have.. a fishy one maybe? Or what about jelly meat?
I don’t know a lot about scratch but could you make it a bit longer? And maybe a bit slower as well? And how about some other animals chasing the truck?
Happy scratching Aaliyah!
Thanks for the suggestions, Marleen! I'll add some of them! I was just waiting for a few other comments about what I could add to make it like and actual story.
DeleteOh cool.. and will you post it when you’re done?
DeleteO wow Aaliyah! Love your animation. Can't wait to see the finish product. I wonder whats going to happen next.
ReplyDeleteHi Aaliyah,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching you're scratch project.
You're animation reminded me about when I made a scratch animation.
looking forward to seeing more on your blog.
Bye.
Hi Aaliyah,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching you're scratch project.
Was it hard to make.
whats you're scratch username mine is unicorn girl-100.
keep up the good work.
Bye!