There aren't many similes and metaphors in it but I've highlighted them all.
They were all humans trying to win a competitive poker game. To get a prize probably.
Who would have thought that seven dogs could play poker. They’re just like humans, all different breeds, it looks like.
Except for three of them which look like siblings.
The seven dogs play poker on a green and brown table, with Brown Wood chairs with red velvet seats. The room was slightly dark and the walls behind them were dark blue and a small painting in the middle of it.
I wonder who might be winning the game? Or who’s losing the game?
The large red hanging light above them gave the dogs some light to see what they were doing, and a tall, skinny brown clock to tell them the time and when they should finish.
The grey bull dog was holding a card with its back paw, Like a Monkey, maybe?
They were all humans trying to win a competitive poker game. To get a prize probably.
Hi Aaliyah,
ReplyDeleteGood try, but I think the prompt is to make up a story, you have described the picture. Give the dogs names and personalities. Some example of the scene, you could make them like humans and give us a conversation or maybe they are normal dogs and the mess a human gets into trying to get them to pose for the picture. Or just let your imagination go wild. Come on and have fun with it.
Hi Aaliyah It's Taliyah from Belfast School
ReplyDeleteYou are really good at doing this sort of stuff because you have described it very well. This reminded me of when my class did something like this. Maybe next time you could say which sentence is a metaphor and which sentence was a simile. Why did you decide to do this ?
-Taliyah
Hi Aaliyah,
ReplyDeleteWow good job I think you were supposed to describe the picture but it's good anyway.
From Noah!